4/10, See Me

Sarah,

Your English is appalling:

* you need a colon, a comma or a dash after Friday, Saturday and Sunday;
* capital letters go at the beginning of sentences, for names (i.e. Simon, Dan) and nationalities (i.e. Thai — that's how it's spelt by the way);
* you should put spaces after full stops;
* "that's" and "Dan's" need apostrophes;
* "tucked" is not spelt "tooked";
* And "and" should never begin a sentence!!